Now, you will learn about the 5 steps to writing a good story. It will
show you how to pre-write, write, revise, proofread, and publish. This
will teach you how to write a better story. Now get on your horse and
ride into the world of writing.
1.
Prewriting- Before you start your story you have to think about what you
want to write. This is called Prewriting. Something you can do is making
a story web. That is when you think of ideas to make your story, like
who is going to be in it, the setting, the plot, and the
problem/solution and organize them graphically.
2.
Writing-This is the step to writing your first draft. You put all your
ideas that you had into paragraph form.
3.
Edit- After you have written your rough draft of your story it is time
to edit your story. You give it to a friend or a parent and let them
read it through. They need to check if your spelling, punctuation,
grammar, and capitals are in the right place and if everything is ready
for a final copy.
4.
Proofreading- Ok, now you must read over your story and make sure that
there are no missed mistakes and everything is the way you like it.
5.
Publishing- Wow. It is already time for you to write your final copy.
Take your rough draft and copy it on a computer or paper and then you
are done!
(Before you write your final copy make
sure everything is the way you like it.)
Remember;
Exceptional writing:
- Focused and reflects
exceptional insights into the topic
- Shows versatile writing
strategies
- Uses strong vocabulary
- The writer takes a risk in
creating the piece
- Words are not repeated
- Uses a variety of sentence
starters
- The piece is not retelling
nor predictable
- The writer's voice is
easily recognizable
- The reader is engaged
- The ending gives closure to
the piece
- The writer uses image,
strong action verbs, and comparisons throughout out the piece
- There are a few, if any,
sentence-level errors.
Writing process
Practicing exercise
A. Complete:
- Share
- use ideas
to write your first copy(pencil)
B. Choose the best answer:
- complete
sentences, spelling, capitalization, punctuation, correction marks,
write complete copy
Revising
Prewriting
Editing
Publishing
- choose a
topic, topic, organize ideas, brainstorm \
Revising
Publishing
Editing
Prewriting
C. True/False Question
- Revising →
complete sentences, spelling, capitalization, punctuation,
correction marks, write complete copy
True
False
Writing process
Practicing exercise-Answer key
- Publishing
- Writing-rough draft
- Editing
- Prewriting
- True
Writing process
Quiz
I. Editing: How many mistakes can you
find?
Anthony Visits Nick
On sunday, Anthony went over to Nicks
house to play basketball. They played a gam of one-on-one. Anthony made
six baskets, bute nick made eight Nick was the winner. After the game,
both boys whent in side to have some snack’s and watch television.
Writing process
Quiz-Answer key
On Sunday,
Anthony went over to Nick's house to play
basketball. They played a game of one-on-one. Anthony made
six baskets, but Nick made eight. Nick was the winner. After
the game, both boys went inside to have
some snacks and watch television.
Skills:
capitalization
possessive nouns
spelling
compound
Writing process
Test
Seize the Day
Written by Sharon Fabian
School had started a week ago, and so this
Labor Day didn't seem like a big event. It wasn't the end-of-summer
celebration that it had once been. This year, Mark and his friend Paul
were just hanging around in his house doing nothing in particular.
Then Mark's cell phone played its familiar
tune. "Hello."
"Be ready to go in ten minutes. I'll pick
you up," said Kelly.
A minute later their friend Tim got the
same call.
So did Alexis. And Joni. And Paul.
When Kelly pulled into Mark's driveway,
the others were already aboard. Mark and Paul climbed in. Her mom's
faded maroon minivan had room for all six of them, and Kelly had used it
to drive them all many times in the two years since she got her license.
No one knew what Kelly had in mind today.
"First stop - Starbucks," she said. "For a
quick planning meeting." At the coffee shop Kelly asked
everyone to pool their money. "Let's see
how much we've got - the more money we have, the farther we can go."
It turned out that Kelly's plan was to
spend the day traveling as far as they possibly could on whatever money
they could scrape together. "Half of our money to get there; half of our
money to get back," she said. "Oh, and a little for food along the way."
It was beginning to look like Kelly had
saved the day. Even if school had already started, a holiday should be
fun.
They talked about which direction to go
and how far their money would take them. They had enough to drive almost
eight hours out and eight hours back, but that would mean stopping for
lunch and dinner plus driving late into the night. And they had to be
ready for school early in the morning.
"We don't need lunch and dinner," said
Paul. "We can just buy a big bag of snacks at the grocery store before
we leave. That'll save more money for gas."
"We can take turns driving," said Joni.
"And we'll be resting in the van - we'll be fine for school tomorrow."
"I say we go for it," said Alexis. "Like
my Latin teacher said, ‘Carpe diem. Seize the day.' "
"OK. Where should we head for?" said Kelly.
I. Answer the following questions before
you finish the story.
1. Choose a setting for the beginning of
the story. Then look at a map and choose several locations that they
could travel to.
2. Make a list of the characters in the
story, and then list one or two characteristics for each one.
3. Describe the minivan - its appearance
inside and out and its condition.
4. What are some complications that could
happen along the way?
5. What might happen at their destination?
6. What could happen on the way home or
the next day as a result of their trip?
7.
Choose one main problem for your story. Then brainstorm possible
solutions.
8.
In a few words, sum up the friends' Labor Day.
9. Using the ideas you wrote for the
thinking questions, write the rest of this Labor Day adventure. Be sure
to include dialog. Write in complete sentences, using correct
punctuation. Be creative!
Writing process
Test-Answer key
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